Yes,
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i like the rain but i don\'t like so many raining.
So if it\'s raining, i walk around neighborhood outside with some musics and an umbrella.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you again for submitting your homework. ^^
I like how you spend your time when it\'s raining. I feel like it\'s relaxing. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> Yes, I like the rain but I don\'t like it when it\'s raining hard.
So if it\'s raining, i walk around neighborhood outside with some musics and an umbrella.
So if it\'s raining, i walk around neighborhood outside with some musics and an umbrella.
>> So if it\'s raining, I walk around the neighborhood outside with an umbrella while listening to music.
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