Yes,
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That\'s important to everyone. If you want to raise money, you would have a seed money. That\'s why we have to keep money.
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>> CORRECT.
If you want to raise money, you would have a seed money.
>> If you want to raise money, then you should have a money to invest.
That\'s why we have to keep money.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: That\'s why we have to save money.
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