yes day2
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In the friday journal I can`t write more. So anyway it was 6 P.M. So we finish dinner at 8 and we sleep at the living room and play the night board game and we fell in to sleep. I think that it`s a good plan but there is a bad thing to when our yes day ends my mom and dads yes day starts! OH~~~~ MAN~~~~~~~~!
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Hi [이름] Ju! Thank you for sending me writing. You such a great student. ^_^
T. Irene
In the friday journal I can`t write more.
>>> I can\'t write a lot in my journal on Fridays.
So anyway it was 6 P.M. So we finish dinner at 8 and we sleep at the living room and play the night board game and we fell in to sleep.
>>> I started writing at 6pm. We finished dinner at 8 pm, played some board games and fell asleep.
I think that it`s a good plan but there is a bad thing to when our yes day ends my mom and dads yes day starts! OH~~~~ MAN~~~~~~~~!
>>> I can\'t write a lot in my journal on Fridays.
So anyway it was 6 P.M. So we finish dinner at 8 and we sleep at the living room and play the night board game and we fell in to sleep.
>>> I started writing at 6pm. We finished dinner at 8 pm, played some board games and fell asleep.
I think that it`s a good plan but there is a bad thing to when our yes day ends my mom and dads yes day starts! OH~~~~ MAN~~~~~~~~!
>>> I think it is a good plan for tomorrow to play the \"yes-day\" with my mom and dad.
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