Yes, I believe in ghosts.
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Yes, I believe in ghosts.
When I was a high school student, I studied very hard during the exam period.
So, I fell a sleep at the desk. Suddenly, I listened a man\'s voice.
But, It wasn\'t my father, and brother\'s voice. I think it was a ghost\'s voice!!
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!
When I was a high school student, I studied very hard during the exam period.
>> Correct
Your story is so creepy.
Hearing a voice is really scary.
Andrea
Yes, I believe in ghosts.
>> Correct
When I was a high school student, I studied very hard during the exam period.
>> Correct
So, I fell a sleep at the desk. Suddenly, I listened a man\'s voice.
>> So fell asleep on the desk, then I heard a man\'s voice.
But, It wasn\'t my father, and brother\'s voice.
>> Butit wasn\'t my father\'s nor brother\'s voice.
I think it was a ghost\'s voice!!
>> Correct
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