Yes, I dance.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I dance. Since I was young, I loved dance.
But, when I was a high school student, I didn\'t have much time to dance. Because I had to study hard to enter the university I really wanted.
Now, I entered the university I really wanted, and joined dance club.
Every Tuesday and Thursday evening, I dance from 6 to 10. I\'m really happy to dance, and I can feel my physical strength improving as well.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!
You\'re lucky to have such a talent!
Among all the kindergarten teachers, I\'m the only one who can\'t dance.
Andrea
Yes, I dance.
>> Yes, I can dance.
Since I was young, I loved dance.
>> I have loved dancing since I was young.
But, when I was a high school student, I didn\'t have much time to dance. Because I had to study hard to enter the university I really wanted.
>> But when I was a high school student, I didn\'t have much time to dance because I had to study hard to enter the university I really wanted.
>> But when I was a high school student, I didn\'t have much time to dance because I had to study hard to enter the university I really wanted.
Now, I entered the university I really wanted, and joined dance club.
>> Now I am at the university, I really wanted to dance so I joined the dance club.
Every Tuesday and Thursday evening, I dance from 6 to 10.
>> Correct
I\'m really happy to dance, and I can feel my physical strength improving as well.
>> I\'m thrilled to dance, and I can feel my physical strength is improving as well.
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