yes.. I did I quit smoking
학생이 쓴 원문
I quit a smoking 3 years ago and it is really hard time while I am quitting it
smoking is also one of a bad habit because that can give damaged to the other people to so many way
now I am not smoking anymore
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. Happy Friday! I am glad to hear you quit smoking. It must have been a struggle quitting especially if you have been smoking for a long time. Thank you for sharing your success story overcoming this bad habit. I am so happy for you^^ Thank you for your homework, keep it up. I hope you have a great weekend. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
yes.. I did I quit smoking
>>> Yes, I quit smoking.
I quit a smoking 3 years ago and it is really hard time while I am quitting it
>>> I quit smoking 3 years ago and I had a hard time going through it.
smoking is also one of a bad habit because that can give damaged to the other people to so many way
>>> Smoking is also one of the bad habits that can damage a person in many ways.
now I am not smoking anymore
>>> I am not smoking anymore.
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