Yes, I do.

2018-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

whereabouts truth at home I'd rather I don't know whereabouts I visited today. To tell the truth, I am going to so agitated in mind again. I always easy at home. I'd rather dispose the study than utilize it. The composition is too hard to me. I want to make a big money but it is not determined by future I think. Wish me a good luck. Thanks. bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello again, Mr. [이름]!~~


Wow! I can see that you\'re diligent. That\'s a good sign.^^


- Teacher Jean~~



whereabouts
truth
at home
I\'d rather
 

I don\'t know whereabouts I visited today.

>> I don\'t know whereabouts I visited today.


 To tell the truth, I am going to so agitated in mind again.

>> To tell you the truth, I am feeling agitated again.


I always easy at home.

>> I always take it easy at home.


I\'d rather dispose the study than utilize it.
 >>NOTE: I\'M NOT SURE WHAT YOU MEAN HERE. LET\'S DISCUSS THIS SENTENCE IN CLASS.^^


The composition is too hard to me.

>> Writing a composition is too hard or difficult for me.
 

I want to make a big money but it is not determined by future I think.
>> I want to have a huge amount of money but I\'ll have to work hard to earn such amount. 

 

Wish me a good luck.

>> Wish me good luck.

>> OR: Wish me luck.
 

Thanks. bye.

>> Thanks. Bye.

>> OR: Thank you. Goodbye.

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