Yes, I do.

2018-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. missed chance 2. excelling 3. something new 4. chosen career 5. mastery I usually don't missed chance that occasionally come to my life. I want to get a excelling grade in english in a few days. When I was young, I always want to buy something new. It is necessary for a company to success in a disturbance situation, It is important to adapt a efficient person who have a chosen career. We were impressed by her mastery of the subject. I paste this sentence from the internet. I don't know accuratly what the meaning of mastery. I got all done that you suggested.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^


Thank you for sending your homework.


Cheers!
Jean



1. missed chance
2. excelling
3. something new
4. chosen career
5. mastery

I usually don\'t missed chance that occasionally come to my life.

>> I usually don\'t missed a chance that occasionally comes to my life.

>> OR: Generally, I take advantage of a chance that comes to my life.


 I want to get a excelling grade in english in a few days.

>> I want to get an excellent grade in English in just a matter of days.

>> OR: I want to excel in my English test which I\'m going to take in a few days.


 When I was young, I always want to buy something new.

>> I always wanted to buy something new when I was young.


 It is necessary for a company to success in a disturbance situation, It is important to adapt a efficient person who have a chosen career.

>> It is necessary for a company to overcome a difficult situation. It is important that a person becomes efficient and adapts to his chosen career.


 We were impressed by her mastery of the subject. I paste this sentence from the internet. I don\'t know accuratly what the meaning of mastery.

>> We were impressed by her mastery of the subject. I copied this sentence from the internet as I don\'t know the exact meaning of mastery.

>> [Mastery means proficiency or expertise. For example: (1) Despite the native speaker\'s mastery of English, there are things that they still need to learn about the language. (2) I mastered English when I was still young as it\'s my first language.]


 I got all done that you suggested.

>> I did everything that you suggested.


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