Yes, I do.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Jean
1. missed chance
2. excelling
3. something new
4. chosen career
5. mastery
I usually don\'t missed chance that occasionally come to my life.
>> I usually don\'t missed a chance that occasionally comes to my life.
>> OR: Generally, I take advantage of a chance that comes to my life.
I want to get a excelling grade in english in a few days.
>> I want to get an excellent grade in English in just a matter of days.
>> OR: I want to excel in my English test which I\'m going to take in a few days.
When I was young, I always want to buy something new.
>> I always wanted to buy something new when I was young.
It is necessary for a company to success in a disturbance situation, It is important to adapt a efficient person who have a chosen career.
>> It is necessary for a company to overcome a difficult situation. It is important that a person becomes efficient and adapts to his chosen career.
We were impressed by her mastery of the subject. I paste this sentence from the internet. I don\'t know accuratly what the meaning of mastery.
>> We were impressed by her mastery of the subject. I copied this sentence from the internet as I don\'t know the exact meaning of mastery.
>> [Mastery means proficiency or expertise. For example: (1) Despite the native speaker\'s mastery of English, there are things that they still need to learn about the language. (2) I mastered English when I was still young as it\'s my first language.]
I got all done that you suggested.
>> I did everything that you suggested.
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