Yes! I have a ghost stories...
학생이 쓴 원문
It happened when I was a kid, me and my family went on a picnic in a forest. When I was going to the forest that day, I went on foot, so I asked \"can you buy me some water?\" because I was so thirsty. Then she said \"Okay I will buy you some water with your father, don\'t go anywhere okay?\". I said of course I knew, and I was playing with my younger brother, then the sound of the wind was heard in the deep of the woods where the wind was blowing hard. My younger brother said \"I want to go there\", but I didn\'t think for some reason, so I just asked to stay. But that\'s when I hear a sound like \"Oh... it\'s a waste...\" in my ears. I was so scared at that time, so I cried there, and then my mom and dad asked what was going on. they must be far away, but when I asked how you heard my cries, my mom said, \"Huh? Where have we been?\".
강사 첨삭
Good evening Maria!
I had a similar experience of a man\'s cough in front of my face although there was no one in the room. That happened to me when I was on the radio. Sometimes, I always feel like I am with someone in the room. Anyway, ghosts are not real, they say. So how can our experiences be explained? Let\'s talk about that tomorrow in class.
Thanks for this one, it\'s very good! Catch you soon.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
When I was going to the forest that day, I went on foot, so I asked \"can you buy me some water?\" because I was so thirsty.
>> Correct!
Then she said \"Okay I will buy you some water with your father, don\'t go anywhere okay?\".
>> Correct!
I said of course I knew, and I was playing with my younger brother, then the sound of the wind was heard in the deep of the woods where the wind was blowing hard.
>> Correct!
My younger brother said \"I want to go there\", but I didn\'t think for some reason, so I just asked to stay.
>> Correct!
But that\'s when I hear a sound like \"Oh... it\'s a waste...\" in my ears.
>> But that\'s when I heard a sound like \"Oh... it\'s a waste...\" in my ears.
I was so scared at that time, so I cried there, and then my mom and dad asked what was going on.
>> Correct!
they must be far away, but when I asked how you heard my cries, my mom said, \"Huh? Where have we been?\".
>> They must have been far away, but when I asked if they heard my cries, and my mom said, \"Huh? Where have you been?\"
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