Yes, I have a secret.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I have a secret.
When I was young, I told a lie to my mom.
Once a day, she cooked curry for my family. But, I didn\'t want to eat carrots in curry.
So, I moved some carrots in my dish to my brother\'s dish when he looked elsewhere, and I said I ate all the carrots on my plate.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!
When I was young, I told a lie to my mom.
Once a day, she cooked curry for my family. But, I didn\'t want to eat carrots in curry.
So, I moved some carrots in my dish to my brother\'s dish when he looked elsewhere, and I said I ate all the carrots on my plate.
Your story is fantastic!
It made me laugh.
Those were childhood memories.
Andrea
Yes, I have a secret.
>> Correct
When I was young, I told a lie to my mom.
>> When I was young, I lied to my mom.
Once a day, she cooked curry for my family. But, I didn\'t want to eat carrots in curry.
>> One day, she cooked curry for my family with carrots that I didn\'t want to eat.
So, I moved some carrots in my dish to my brother\'s dish when he looked elsewhere, and I said I ate all the carrots on my plate.
>> I transferred some carrots from my dish to my brother\'s dish when he looked elsewhere, then I said that I ate all the carrots on my plate.
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