Yes, I have seen a shark.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I have seen a shark.
When I was young, I went to aquarium with mt parents.
I saw a big shark, and I was so scared.
If I actually meet a shark in the ocean, I have to run away so far.
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Hi Kara!
When I was young, I went to aquarium with mt parents.
>> When I was young, I went to an aquarium with my parents.
If I actually meet a shark in the ocean, I have to run away so far.
I haven\'t seen a shark yet.
The aquarium is quite far from our city.
It would take at least 6 hours.
Andrea
Yes, I have seen a shark.
>> Correct
When I was young, I went to aquarium with mt parents.
>> When I was young, I went to an aquarium with my parents.
I saw a big shark, and I was so scared.
>> Correct
If I actually meet a shark in the ocean, I have to run away so far.
>> If I were to encounter a shark in the ocean, I would have to swim as far as I could.
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