Yes, I have seen someone

Well said, [이름].
Thanks for doing a lot of homework today.

I appreciate it a lot. I hope that you will finish all of your task early.

Please be mindful of the corrections given below.

Always be careful with your word order and usage of words.

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Teacher Nina

Drunk driving is very serious problem in our society.

>> Drunk driving is a very serious problem in our society.
it is illegal, also it has a potential to make accident.

>> It is illegal, it is also possible to make an accident.

>> OR: It is illegal, it can lead to an accident. 
To matter worse, It provoke another accident. 

>> To make matter worse, it provokes another accident.
When a person drink alchol, he/she can\'t controll handle and accelletion.

>> When a person drank alcohol, he/ she can\'t control the handle and accelerator.

>> OR: When a person is under the influence of alcohol, he/ she can\'t control the handle and accelerator. 
In additionally, the reaction speed is definately lower than usual.

>> In addition, the reaction speed is definitely lower than usual.

Atcutally, I have seen these crimers in two times since 2014.

>> Actually, I have seen accidents/ crimes twice this year. 
I don\'t understand because it is semi-murdering.

>> Did you mean: I don\'t understand because it is also like killing a person. 

>> OR: I don\'t understand because it is also murder.
Because of them, we can\'t get enough bonus this year.

>> Correct
We have to be quite to show other people our attitude about regret.

>> We have to be quiet to show other people our attitude and regrets.
One of them kicked out because of alchol proportion. he got 0.2%.
>> One of them was kicked out because of alcohol intoxication, he got 0.2 %.
Anyway, It is not good habit to drive a car in dunk.

>> Anyway, it is not a good habit to drive a car when you are drunk.

>> OR: Anyway, it is not a good habit to drive a car when you are under the influence of alcohol.