Yes! I have teddy bears!

2021-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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There are two very cute teddy bears in my house. Their names are Letty and Curie. Letty refers to a big bear, Curie refers to a small bear, Letty is created after the front pronunciation of a red T-shirt, and Curie is created after the front pronunciation of a cute ribbon. I made this posture, because Curie is sitting on Letty\'s legs so comfortably, so Letty pressing Curie\'s head because is unpleasant. I\'m curious, too. Is there a teddy bear in your house? If so, what\'s the name of your teddy bear?

강사 첨삭

Hi there Maria!

Yes, we do have a blue Teddy Bear at home. According to my son, the Teddy Bear has been suffering under his pillow as it is squeezed tightly every night (He\'s heavy, that\'s why.)

Your Teddy Bears here are so cute, they look like they are taking care of each other well.

Tell me more about them when I see you in class tomorrow.

Thanks for sharing your Teddy Bears with me! I will show you mine in class as well tomorrow.

-T. Donna =) 

There are two very cute teddy bears in my house. 
>> Correct!

Their names are Letty and Curie. 
>> Correct!

Letty refers to a big bear, Curie refers to a small bear, Letty is created after the front pronunciation of a red T-shirt, and Curie is created after the front pronunciation of a cute ribbon. 
>> Letty refers to a big bear, Curie refers to a small bear. Letty is created after the front pronunciation of a red T-shirt, and Curie is created after the front pronunciation of a cute ribbon. (USE PERIOD INSTEAD OF COMMA.)

I made this posture, because Curie is sitting on Letty\'s legs so comfortably, so Letty pressing Curie\'s head because is unpleasant. I\'m curious, too. 
>> I made this posture, because Curie is sitting on Letty\'s legs so comfortably so Letty is pressing Curie\'s head because it is unpleasant. I\'m curious, too.  

Is there a teddy bear in your house? If so, what\'s the name of your teddy bear?
>> Correct!

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