Yes, I have tried flying a kite.
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Yes, I have tried flying a kite.
When I was 10, my brother and I wanted to make our kite.
So, We used a paper, glue, wool, etc.
However, It wasn\'t good at flying, and we were so sad.
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Hi Kara!
When I was 10, my brother and I wanted to make our kite.
So, We used a paper, glue, wool, etc.
>> So we used different materials such as paper, glue, wool, and etc.
It is a childhood game for us.
We used to make our own kites from plastics and rods.
We even have a Kite Festival held every February in in our city before.
Andera
Yes, I have tried flying a kite.
>> Yes, I had tried flying a kite in the past.
When I was 10, my brother and I wanted to make our kite.
>> Correct
So, We used a paper, glue, wool, etc.
>> So we used different materials such as paper, glue, wool, and etc.
However, It wasn\'t good at flying, and we were so sad.
>> However, it wasn\'t good at flying; it made us sad.
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