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2014-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I have a friends of mine who will have arranged marrige. Many people think that arranged marrige is made from each of their parents will. In this case, the bride and broom have to marry even they don't want to so, there is many sad love stories about arranged marrige. because they are actually forced to live together. so many arranged couple live seperately after marrige. But the case of my friend, though It is an arranged marrige but he also want to marry her. I don't have any chance to meet her but It looks like they share some kind of religious belife so that make it possible to marry with her. he wiil marry her in december, they have known each other for 6 month. It is amazing that they decide to get marry in such a short time. Love seems to make manything possible.

강사 첨삭

[이름]!

How are you? Thank you for sharing your friend\'s story.

Love is really powerful.

It makes impossible, possible. Hihihihi.

I hope that you and Carolyn will have a happy ending. ^_^

Have a great night.

Teacher Nina


I have a friends of mine who will have arranged marrige.

>> I have friends who had an arranged marriage.
>> OR: I have friends who had a fixed marriage.
Many people think that arranged marrige is made from each of their parents will.

>> Many people think that arranged marriage is made because of their parents\' will.
In this case, the bride and broom have to marry even they don\'t want to so, there is many sad love stories about arranged marrige.

>> In this case, the bride and groom have to get married even if they don\'t want to. There are many sad love stories about arranged marriage.

because they are actually forced to live together. so many arranged couple live seperately after marrige. 

>> Because they are actually forced to live together. So, many arranged couples live separately after marriage.

>> OR: Because they are actually forced to live together. So, many arranged couples get a divorce after marriage.


But the case of my friend, though It is an arranged marrige but he also want to marry her.

>> But in the case of my friend, though it is an arranged marriage, he wanted to marry her

>> OR: But in my friend\'s case, though it is an arranged marriage, he wanted to marry his partner.

I don\'t have any chance to meet her but It looks like they share some kind of religious belife so that make it possible to marry with her.

>> I didn\'t have the chance to meet her, but it looked like they share some kind of religious belief so it was possible for him to marry her.
he wiil marry her in december, they have known each other for 6 month.

>> He will marry her in December, they have known each other for six months now.

>> OR: They will get married in December, they\'ve been a couple for six months now.
It is amazing that they decide to get marry in such a short time.

>> It is amazing that they decided to get married even if they\'ve been together for a short period of time.
Love seems to make manything possible.

>> Love seems to make many things possible.

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