Yes, I like Mickey Mouse.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I like Mickey Mouse.
He is wearing a red pants, and yellow shoes. I like this color com[이름]ation.
Especially, he is always smiling happily.
So, whenever I feel down, I use to look up Mickey Mouse video.
강사 첨삭
Hi Su[이름]!
He is wearing a red pants, and yellow shoes.
So, whenever I feel down, I use to look up Mickey Mouse video.
I really like Mickey Mouse.
My dream is to go to Disneyland.
I have many things that have a Mickey Mouse print.
Andrea
Yes, I like Mickey Mouse.
>> Correct
He is wearing a red pants, and yellow shoes.
>> He wears red pants and yellow shoes.
I like this color com[이름]ation.
>> Correct
Especially, he is always smiling happily.
>> He always smiles happily.
So, whenever I feel down, I use to look up Mickey Mouse video.
>> So whenever I feel down, I used to look up Mickey Mouse videos.
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