Yes, I love butterflies.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I love butterflies. The first reason is that they have various patterns and colors in their wings.
Second, they don’t harm me unlike insects like mosquitoes and cockroaches.
Lastly, They make me to feel spring.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!
Second, they don’t harm me unlike insects like mosquitoes and cockroaches.
Lastly, They make me to feel spring.
Butterflies from afar are really beautiful.
However, I was a little scared.
I heard that the dust coming from them can make you blind.
Andrea
Yes, I love butterflies.
>> Correct
The first reason is that they have various patterns and colors in their wings.
>> The first reason is that they have various patterns and colors on their wings.
Second, they don’t harm me unlike insects like mosquitoes and cockroaches.
>> Second, they don’t harm me, unlike other insects such as mosquitoes and cockroaches.
Lastly, They make me to feel spring.
>> Lastly. they make me feel spring.
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