Yes! I love my apartment!!
학생이 쓴 원문
My apartment has a total of 25 floors, and there is a small park opposite. There is also a playground on the back, so it is very convenient. Our apartment is very quiet. Because there is a mountain next to it, it blocks various noises, and it is installed on the top, so it is very easy to rest with the sound of birds in the morning and the sound of crickets at night. I live in an apartment too often, so sometimes I want to live in a mansion or house, but It has its strengths and weaknesses, right?
강사 첨삭
I agree with you Maria!
I live in a house so I don\'t have to ride the elevator to reach my home. Apartments save so much space as houses need a lot of boundaries and fences.
No matter what type of home we have, as long as it is safe, quiet, and comfortable and we share it with the people we love, it is home. Home is always where the heart is.
Happy weekend. See you in a couple of days!
-T. Donna =)
>> My apartment has a total of 25 floors and there is a small park opposite to it.
There is also a playground on the back, so it is very convenient.
>> There is also a playground at the back, so it is very convenient.
Our apartment is very quiet.
>> Correct!
Because there is a mountain next to it, it blocks various noises, and it is installed on the top, so it is very easy to rest with the sound of birds in the morning and the sound of crickets at night.
>> Correct!
I live in an apartment too often, so sometimes I want to live in a mansion or house, but It has its strengths and weaknesses, right?
>> Correct!
OR: I live in an apartment too often, so sometimes I want to live in a mansion or a house, but It has its strengths and weaknesses, right?
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