Yes! I saw it!!
학생이 쓴 원문
I can\'t go right now, because I\'m busy now, but when I was young, I often went to the beach to play with my family. I\'ve never seen a lighthouse up close, but just looking at it from a distance seems to have been a really good experience. At that time, I didn\'t know, so I asked my dad, \"Who lives in that house?\", \"That lighthouse catching a thief with the light?\", my dad said, \"That lighthouse is a traffic light in the sea\". When I hear it now, I can understand what it mean, but I was too young at that time, so I have to ask, \"A traffic light in the sea?\", \"Is a car floating in the sea?\" The lighthouse was so beautiful, and shiny. It was memorable enough!
강사 첨삭
Hello Maria!
I have neither seen a lighthouse up close but then it is a very good place to be at, I think because you can catch the beautiful scenery of the ocean.
By the way, that photo above is so beautiful! Well, it guides big and small ships in the sea.
Thanks for the good exposition, see you in class soon!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
I\'ve never seen a lighthouse up close, but just looking at it from a distance seems to have been a really good experience.
>> Correct!
At that time, I didn\'t know, so I asked my dad, \"Who lives in that house?\", \"That lighthouse catching a thief with the light?\", my dad said, \"That lighthouse is a traffic light in the sea\".
>> At that time, I didn\'t know, so I asked my dad, \"Who lives in that house?\", \"Is that lighthouse catching a thief with the light?\" My dad said, \"That lighthouse is a traffic light in the sea\".
When I hear it now, I can understand what it mean, but I was too young at that time, so I have to ask, \"A traffic light in the sea?\", \"Is a car floating in the sea?\"
>> When I hear it now, I can understand what it means, but I was too young at that time, so I have to ask, \"A traffic light in the sea?\", \"Is that a car floating in the sea?\"
The lighthouse was so beautiful, and shiny. It was memorable enough!
>> Correct!
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