Yes, I think

2014-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Yes, the marrige life based on love is better than that based on arranged. Many Corean people meet their fiance with blind date. Actually It is not the "blind date" because many people want to chech their "blind date" partner's face in ahead of dating. Additionally, Many people calculate their partner's spec(speculation) such as a salary, appearance, car, home. and they choose their own fiance with these factors. but I want to ask a question to them. won't change your mind If your fiance get a less salary than before, or get old and getting uglier than before? In Corea, there is a famous entertainer who get married based on his love. He resently, had a wedding ceremony again with his wife to memory their tenth anniversary. I think that is the true love. So I want to live with my real partner, who loves me for life time.

강사 첨삭

[이름]!

You are definitely right.

We should marry someone whom we really love.

There are a lot of factors to deal with in terms of marriage.

We should be ready before getting married.

My mother always tell me that marriage life is not easy. You can\'t get out of it easily.

It is a long term commitment. Thanks for your time today.
Have a great day.
Teacher Nina

Yes, the marrige life based on love is better than that based on arranged.

>> Yes, marriage life that is based on love is better than an arranged one.

>> OR: Marriage life that is based on love is better than fixed marriage.
Many Corean people meet their fiance with blind date.

>> Many Korean people meet their fiance in a blind date.

>> OR: Many Korean people meet their fiance during a blind date.
Actually It is not the \"blind date\" because many people want to chech their \"blind date\" partner\'s face in ahead of dating.

>> Actually it is not really a blind date, because many people prefer to see the other person\'s physical appearance before going out on a date.
Additionally, Many people calculate their partner\'s spec(speculation) such as a salary, appearance, car, home. and they choose their own fiance with these factors.
>> In addition, many people see their partner\'s stability in life such as salary, physical appearance, car and house. They choose their fiance based on these factors.

but I want to ask a question to them.

>> But I want to ask them a question.
won\'t change your mind If your fiance get a less salary than before, or get old and getting uglier than before?

>> Won\'t you going to change your mind if your fiance gets a smaller salary than before or becoming uglier than the time you first met?

>> OR: Are you going to change your mind if your fiance gets a smaller salary than before or becoming uglier than the time you first met?

In Corea, there is a famous entertainer who get married based on his love.

>> There is a famous entertainer who got married based on love in Korea.
He resently, had a wedding ceremony again with his wife to memory their tenth anniversary.

>> He recently had a wedding ceremony again with his wife to celebrate their tenth wedding anniversary.

>> OR: He recently had a renewal of vows with his wife to celebrate their tenth wedding anniversary.
I think that is the true love.

>> I think that is true love.

So I want to live with my real partner, who loves me for life time.

>> So, I want to be with a partner who will love me for a lifetime.

>> OR: So, I want to be with a partner who will love me for the rest of my life.

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