yes I want to change the my personality

2020-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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sometimes I feel like I am lazy person why I am thinking like that because when I feel bad I hate to do anything when I waked up a late time in the morning that time I was feeling bad I want to be more diligent man The bad habit get to affect from each one of personality

강사 첨삭

Hey again, [이름]. Thank you for constantly keeping up with your homework and catching up when you missed it. I do appreciate it. And to give you comfort, nobody\'s perfect and that is one of our goals as human beings. I think part of it is to be better people and to have better personalities. Have a good night. ~Jane c\",) 


sometimes I feel like I am lazy person why I am thinking like that because when I feel bad I hate to do anything
>>> Sometimes, I feel like I am a lazy person and why do I think that? Because when I feel bad I hate doing anything. 

when I waked up a late time in the morning that time I was feeling bad
>>> When I wake up late in the morning, I would feel bad that time. 

I want to be more diligent man
>>> I want to be a more diligent man. 

The bad habit get to affect from each one of personality
>>> That bad habit affects my personality. 

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