Yes! I was used when I was 6th grade on elementary school.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was 6th grade my science teacher, said: \"we will use a microscope and observing cells\", so I feel very exicited, because I have never seen a cells. My class begin to see a cells through a microscope. Suddenly, the sound what something broken is hear to my ears. Our teacher become very scare when something broken or some of my friends are runing in our room. These was it, two friends are runing when our teacher went to toliet, then they broke a microscope for mistake. That time our teacher is back to our class, and see our class\'s mood. Teacher know what situation is this. Microscope was really really expensive, so we have to share this four microscope each team, but two friends broke this expensive microscope, so they ahve to buy it. It was so afraid, but also it was very fun experience.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Maria!
What a tragic experience in using the microscope! By now, I hope that your classmates were able to buy a new one for other children\'s future use. Next time, everyone needs to be extra careful when they deal with these instruments because they are absolutely expensive.
These instruments should be labeled, \"Handle with care.\".
Thanks for writing down your answer. See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> When I was on the 6th grade, my science teacher, said, \"We will use a microscope and observe cells.\" So I felt very excited because I have never seen cells.
My class begin to see a cells through a microscope. Suddenly, the sound what something broken is hear to my ears.
>> My class began to see cells through the microscope. Suddenly, I heard a breaking sound hear on my ears.
Our teacher become very scare when something broken or some of my friends are runing in our room.
>> Our teacher became very scared when something broke or some of my friends ran in our room.
These was it, two friends are runing when our teacher went to toliet, then they broke a microscope for mistake.
>> Then, two of my friends were running when our teacher went to the toilet then they broke a microscope by mistake.
That time our teacher is back to our class, and see our class\'s mood. Teacher know what situation is this.
>> That time our teacher was back to our class, and saw our class\'s mood. The teacher knew what the situation was.
Microscope was really really expensive, so we have to share this four microscope each team, but two friends broke this expensive microscope, so they ahve to buy it.
>> Microscope was really, really expensive, so we have to share the four microscopes with each team, but two friends broke this expensive microscope, so they have to buy it.
It was so afraid, but also it was very fun experience.
>> It was so scary, but also was a very fun experience.
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