yes i will do!!

2011-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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i will make you laugh !:) i woke up early today, and i went to my english academy. i got a mini toeic. and i got a bad grade. but i'm happy. because i have a lot of time to study english in now and i can do that!! after the midterm exam, my feeling is better. and i will study everything that i'm recieved. and i considerate to change the course. i want to study OPIC. have a nice day, and i always love you!

강사 첨삭

Good morning, beautiful! How was your weekend?

That뭩 good to hear from you, [이름]!

Let뭩 have a happy talk tomorrow.

Loving you,

T. Joanna

 

will make you laugh !:)
>>will make you laugh!:)
i woke up early today, and i went to my english academy.
>>I woke up early today and I went to the English Academy.

>>I woke up early today and attended my English academy class.
i got a mini toeic. and i got a bad grade.
>>I took a mini TOEIC and got a bad grade.
but i'm happy. 
>>But I뭢 happy.
because i have a lot of time to study english in now and i can do that!!
>>That is because I have a lot of time to study English now and I can do that.
after the midterm exam, my feeling is better.
>>I felt better after the midterm exam.
and i will study everything that i'm recieved. and i considerate to change the course. i want to study OPIC. 
>>I will study better than I used to do. And I am considering shifting into OPIC course.
have a nice day, and i always love you!

>>Have a nice day and remember that I always love you!

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