Yes, not always but sometimes.
학생이 쓴 원문
They are sometimes visits my home.
But it is rarely happen.
Contrary our family goes to their house it's rather fun than being visited by relatives.
Nowadays I have become lazy I seldome go out of my house to somewhere.
I am doing in my room not going out somewhere.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Teacher Jean
They are sometimes visits my home.
>> They sometimes visit my home.
But it is rarely happen.
>> But it rarely happens.
Contrary our family goes to their house it\'s rather fun than being visited by relatives.
>> Our family goes to their homes as it\'s more fun than being visited by relatives.
Nowadays I have become lazy I seldome go out of my house to somewhere.
>> Nowadays, I have become lazy as I seldom go out or go somewhere.
I am doing in my room not going out somewhere.
>> I just stay in my room and don\'t go anywhere.
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