Yes! Of course!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, I want to go to the moon, there are a lot of stars, also there is a beautiful milky way, so this is why I want to go to the moon. But you know, my dream is not a astronauts, my dream is deplomat. So mabye I can\'t go to the moon, and space, but I will protects a lot of astronauts. If I became a deplomat, I will be responsible for continuing to explore, investigate, develop and discover more about the universe. In conclusion, of course, I want to go to the moon, but instead of going, I will protect the astronauts so that the beautiful universe can continue.
강사 첨삭
Wow, Maria!
Very well said! I think this is a very good answer. I hope that you can fulfill all of the duties of a great true diplomat of the world and even on outer space!
Space travel is near, brace yourself.
Thanks for this composition, see you soon again.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: Milky Way
But you know, my dream is not a astronauts, my dream is deplomat.
>> But you know, my dream is not to be an astronauts, my dream is to be a diplomat.
So mabye I can\'t go to the moon, and space, but I will protects a lot of astronauts.
>> So maybe I can\'t go to the moon and space but I will protect a lot of astronauts.
If I became a deplomat, I will be responsible for continuing to explore, investigate, develop and discover more about the universe.
>> If I became a diplomat, I will be responsible for continuing to explore, investigate, develop and discover more about the universe.
In conclusion, of course, I want to go to the moon, but instead of going, I will protect the astronauts so that the beautiful universe can continue.
>> Correct!
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