Yes that is ture.
학생이 쓴 원문
We are what we eat.
That means our health is depandant on what we eat.
The quality of food, meal, and so on.
So It is the reason why many moms in the world seek better food.
I believed that my mother also tried to buy better food.
now,, I eat everything.
However when the time before I make baby, I need to be more concious about what we eat.
It is critical to the baby.
There is a study which about relation between Eating and sperm
I will make a super healty sperm...
kkkk
I'wll try.
To make my seed stronger... I need eat something good for our body.
mushroom and vegitable I will eat as many food as I can~!
강사 첨삭
[이름]!
You made me laugh. hahahaha!
I was surprised that you did a lot of homework today.
It is good that you did in during the weekend. ^_^Thanks accepting my suggestion.
You should always eat healthy foods.
I didn\'t know about that study. Hihihihi.
Thanks for sharing about this today.
Thanks for sharing about this today.
Teacher Nina
>> Correct
That means our health is depandant on what we eat.
That means our health is depandant on what we eat.
>> That means our health depends on what we eat.
The quality of food, meal, and so on.
The quality of food, meal, and so on.
>> Correct
So It is the reason why many moms in the world seek better food.
So It is the reason why many moms in the world seek better food.
>> Correct
I believed that my mother also tried to buy better food.
I believed that my mother also tried to buy better food.
>> I believe that my mother also tried to give me healthy foods.
now,, I eat everything.
>> Correct
>> OR: Now, I eat all kinds of food.
However when the time before I make baby, I need to be more concious about what we eat.
>> However, when the time comes that I want to have a child, I need to be more conscious on what I eat.
It is critical to the baby.
>> Correct
It is critical to the baby.
>> Correct
There is a study which about relation between Eating and sperm
>> There is a study which talks about the relationship of eating food and sperm.
I will make a super healty sperm...
>> Correct (spelling check: healthy ^^)
I will make a super healty sperm...
>> Correct (spelling check: healthy ^^)
kkkk
I\'wll try.
>> Correct ( spelling check: will ^^)
To make my seed stronger... I need eat something good for our body.
>> To make my seed stronger, I need to eat something good for our body.
mushroom and vegitable I will eat as many food as I can~!
mushroom and vegitable I will eat as many food as I can~!
>> I will eat a lot of food such as mushroom and vegetables.
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