Yes! the goals can change your life!
학생이 쓴 원문
Having a goal can change your life too. In the past, I lived my life without a goal. But I go more, there are more tests and more things to achieve, so I have to have a goal. I\'m talking about goals such as completing these within this time right now, or solving math problems by this week. The advantages of this goal are numerous. If you set an easy and achievable goal and achieve it, the sense of accomplishment is great, and when you set the next goal, you can get the confidence that you can achieve it, and the satisfaction of the result achieved by combining those goals. So, goals can change our lives enough.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Maria. I AM IMPRESSED!^^ At a very young age, you can understand clearly about achieving goals. You can categorize them as \"short-term goals\" and \"long-term goals\" to keep you more motivated. I appreciate the quote and it exactly defines the first step to achieving our goals. I appreciate you taking the time to do this homework and sharing your thoughts. Have a good one! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
Having a goal can change your life too.
>> CORRECT =)
In the past, I lived my life without a goal.
>> CORRECT =)
But I go more, there are more tests and more things to achieve, so I have to have a goal.
>> But as I move forward in life there are more tests and more things to achieve so I have to have a goal.
I\'m talking about goals such as completing these within this time right now, or solving math problems by this week.
>> I am talking about goals like completing tasks within a period of time such as solving math problems by this week.
The advantages of this goal are numerous.
>> CORRECT =)
If you set an easy and achievable goal and achieve it, the sense of accomplishment is great, and when you set the next goal, you can get the confidence that you can achieve it, and the satisfaction of the result achieved by combining those goals.
>> CORRECT =)
So, goals can change our lives enough.
>> OR: So goals can definitely change our lives.
Having a goal can change your life too.
>> CORRECT =)
In the past, I lived my life without a goal.
>> CORRECT =)
But I go more, there are more tests and more things to achieve, so I have to have a goal.
>> But as I move forward in life there are more tests and more things to achieve so I have to have a goal.
I\'m talking about goals such as completing these within this time right now, or solving math problems by this week.
>> I am talking about goals like completing tasks within a period of time such as solving math problems by this week.
The advantages of this goal are numerous.
>> CORRECT =)
If you set an easy and achievable goal and achieve it, the sense of accomplishment is great, and when you set the next goal, you can get the confidence that you can achieve it, and the satisfaction of the result achieved by combining those goals.
>> CORRECT =)
So, goals can change our lives enough.
>> OR: So goals can definitely change our lives.
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