Yes, the world\'s oceans are dangerous.

2023-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

Yes, the world\'s oceans are dangerous. I think that\'s why we stop using plastic now. And don\'t throw trash in the sea. I think that\'s what we do to protect the sea.

강사 첨삭

Hi Da [이름],

You\'ve made a strong and important point about the dangers of the world\'s oceans. Your message encourages us to take action by reducing plastic use and not littering in the sea. It\'s a responsible approach to protect our environment. Well done!

~Teacher Cathy

 

Yes, the world\'s oceans are dangerous.

>>Yes, the world’s oceans are in danger.

I think that\'s why we stop using plastic now.

>>I think that’s why we should stop using plastic now.

And don\'t throw trash in the sea.

>>And we shouldn’t throw trash into the sea.

I think that\'s what we do to protect the sea.

>>I think that’s what we should do to protect the sea.

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