Yes they do,
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
I am so happy that you shared your thoughts about Ebola. ^^
I hope that you people will be strong to overcome this kind of disease.
Medicines could help a lot. But of course, prevention is better, right?
We can have this topic in class if you want. ^_^
Teacher Nina
Evola hit the whole country in Africa continent and many people have died from it.
>> Ebola hit the whole country of Africa and other continents. Many people died because of it.
But this catastrophy could be prevented by simple ways.
>> But this catastrophe could be prevented in simple ways.
Actually, many drug manufacturing companies alread knew the way of making a drug of Evola.
>> Actually, many pharmaceutical companies already knew the way of making a drug for Ebola.
But they think that It is not profitable because there were not enough demand and their expectation was wrong.
>> But they think that it is not profitable because there weren\'t enough demand and their expectation was wrong.
Many people suffering from it.
>> Many people are suffering from it.
I think our government do well to protect our country from that disease.
>> I think our government is doing well in protecting our country from that disease.
Sorry for people living in Africa, but government made temporary policy to prohibit people who came from Africa.
>> Sorry for the people who are living in Africa, the government made a temporary rule that prohibits people to visit our country who came from that country.
there isn\'t any other choice I think.
>> I think there isn\'t any other choice.
In these days, there was a good news in USA.
>> These days, there was a good in the U.S.
the doctor who was in Africa got sick from Evola, and he finally cured complitely.
>> The doctor who was in Africa got sick and he was completely cured.
I hope that many people are able to survive through other nations\' help
>> I hope that many people can survive through other nations\' help.
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