yes.. we have special food every each other season
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and those food are having little different type and smell an each other provinces.
In the spring we usually eat a seasoned vegetables which we get in our mountains.
The middle in summer some people like to eat the dog because they believe that make them stronger and it can make them to stand out the hot in summer that is kind of our culture since than a long time ago.
While we are autumn season that we have a lot of food form field and sea..
and the one of big holiday in south korea of we called Chuseok that is in the autumn..
but sadness the period of winter to earlier spring is bad season. there is no food in entire our country..
so than a lot of poor people who lived in here were death.
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Thank you for sharing the culture you have in each season.
It\'s totally unique.
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>>Yes, we have special food every other season.
>> Or: Yes, we have special food in each season.
and those food are having little different type and smell an each other provinces.
>> And those food are a little different in type and have different smell from each province.
In the spring we usually eat a seasoned vegetables which we get in our mountains.
In the spring we usually eat a seasoned vegetables which we get in our mountains.
>> In spring, we usually eat seasoned vegetables which we get in our mountains.
The middle in summer some people like to eat the dog because they believe that make them stronger and it can make them to stand out the hot in summer that is kind of our culture since than a long time ago.
The middle in summer some people like to eat the dog because they believe that make them stronger and it can make them to stand out the hot in summer that is kind of our culture since than a long time ago.
>> In the middle of summer, some people like to eat the dog because they believe that makes them stronger and it can make them stand the hot summer. That is the kind of culture we have since a long time ago.
While we are autumn season that we have a lot of food form field and sea..
While we are autumn season that we have a lot of food form field and sea..
>> While when we are in autumn season, we have a lot of food from the field and sea.
and the one of big holiday in south korea of we called Chuseok that is in the autumn..
and the one of big holiday in south korea of we called Chuseok that is in the autumn..
>> And one of the biggest holidays in South Korea is called Chuseok that is in autumn.
but sadness the period of winter to earlier spring is bad season. there is no food in entire our country..
but sadness the period of winter to earlier spring is bad season. there is no food in entire our country..
>> But the saddest is the period from winter to early spring since it is a bad season.
there is no food in entire our country..
>> There is no food in our entire country.
so than a lot of poor people who lived in here were death.
so than a lot of poor people who lived in here were death.
>> So, a lot of poor people who lived in here were dead.
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