Yesterday Class
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
First of all, thanks for your comments about my writing.
Today morning I read your feedback of last class(Wednsday).
At pronounciation part: Brazil and Pyramid
I think these words is too difficult to speak, but I will try to exercize today.
About grammer part: I got it what was wrong.
When I speak engish, I'm get nervous and to skip some words.
I will try to speak slowly and exactly.
Thanks,
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!!! Your welcome... It is my job to make sure that you will somehow learn something from me... ^_^
I hope I was able to help you in some way....
Just practice speaking English on a daily basis, you just have to get used to it so that you will not feel nervous everytime...
Anyway, I have a few corrections here:
Yesterday Class
>> Yesterday's Class
Today morning I read your feedback of last class (Wednsday).
>> This morning I read your feedback about our last class (Wednesday)
At pronounciation part: Brazil and Pyramid>> On the pronunciation part: Brazil and Pyramid
Brazil (bra-zeel) Pyramid (pi-rah-mid)
I think these words is too difficult to speak, but I will try to exercize today.>> I think these words are too difficult to pronounce, but I will try to exercise today.
About grammer part: I got it what was wrong.>> About the grammar part: I knew what was wrong.
When I speak engish, I'm get nervous and to skip some words.>> When I speak English, I get nervous and skip some words.
I really appreciate everything you're doing Mr. [이름].. You are such a good student..
Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday!!!
T. Shy
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