yesterday class review

2019-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

The questions you asked me were good, so I could try to speak more and more. I\'m sorry for that sometimes my answer was not really related to your question. I know what you ask but when I start to say and go on, I start to forgot not only the englsih word but also your question. I will try to answer suitably and clearly. I like that you give me more good expression when my answer had deficiency. so, I\'m happy with your correcting and I want to fully accept your advise. Also please correct this writing and give me more good expression. I will write like this as review of the last class. see you tonight and have a good day

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

Thanks for the review.

I hope you are having a great night!

See you later! ☺

The questions you asked me were good, so I could try to speak more and more.
>> CORRECT

>> OR: The questions you asked were good, so I could express myself more.

I\'m sorry for that sometimes my answer was not really related to your question.

>> I am sorry that I sometimes give you irrelevant answers.

I know what you ask but when I start to say and go on, I start to forgot not only the englsih word but also your question.

>> I know what you asked but when you start to say go on, I start to forget not only the English words but also your question.

I will try to answer suitably and clearly.
>> CORRECT

>> OR: I will try to answer appropriately and clearly next time.

I like that you give me more good expression when my answer had deficiency.

>> I like that you give me much better expressions if my answers are deficient.

so, I\'m happy with your correcting and I want to fully accept your advise.

>> So, I am happy with your corrections and I want to fully accept your advise.

Also please correct this writing and give me more good expression.

>> Also, please correct this writing and give me much better expressions, too.

I will write like this as review of the last class.
>> I will write reviews like this every after our class.

see you tonight and have a good day

>> See you tonight and have a good day!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기