Yesterday, I wathedy a Soccer match on TV
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Hi!!
It\'s good to hear from you again.
Thank you for doing your homework and being a diligent student!!
You did a very good job!!
To answer your question about the possibility of having two mothers or more, I think it is possible.
Because one might feel that a person is like a mother to them even if they are not related by blood.
I hope that I have answered your question.
Thank you for today!!
Bye!!
T. Nina^^
1. agency - agencies
>>CORRECT!!
2. mother - mothers (is it possible having two mothers or more?)
>>CORRECT!! [Is it possible to have two mothers or more?]
3. library - libraries
>>CORRECT!!
4. uncle - uncles
>>CORRECT!!
5. mouse - mouses
>>mice
6. house - houses
>>CORRECT!!
7. tooth - teeth
>>CORRECT!!
8. life - lives
>>CORRECT!!
9. tomato - tomato
>>tomatoes
10. sheep - sheep
>>CORRECT!!
I leaved my office at about 10:30.
>>I left my office at about 10:30.
and I took a shower.
>>CORRECT!! [And-CAPITALIZATION]
I turn on the TV.
>>I turned on the TV.
(actually, it was celphone which is able to watch TV programs)
>>(Actually, it was a cellphone which enables me to watch TV programs.)
anyway, I was very tired yesterday.
>>CORRECT!! [Anyway-CAPITALIZATION]
I tried to watch little but I couldn\'t control.
>>I tried to watch a little but I couldn\'t control myself.
I watched the match until end of the game.
>>I watched the match until/up to the end.
I regreted that but it is no use to regret.
>>I regretted that but it\'s no use to regret it. [regretted-SPELLING]
It was past.
>>It is in the past.
It couldn\'t be revised
>>CORRECT!!
Make the matter worse, Korean soccer team loose that game.
>>Making the matter worse, the Korean soccer team lost that game.
It was terrible night.
>>It was a terrible night.
I hope that it was nightmare.
>>I hope that it was just a nightmare.
but I think they did great job because I believe they did their best.
>>But I think they did a great job because I believe that they did their best.
Next year, 2014, The World Cup will be held in Brazil.
>>Next year in 2014, the World Cup will be held in Brazil.
I hope the bitter of losing game make our team stronger, so that they win the cup in Brazil.
>>I hope that the bitterness in losing the game will make our team stronger, so that they can win the Cup in Brazil.
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