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yesterday, I went to library to study. As I'm in 3 grade, I have to study to get a job. Many people crowded in libarary including me. It was hot day. i walked into there from my home to library. my skin was melting. they were studying very hard. recently, I feel nusing study is very hard. It's important to deal with sick people. and I think i mistaked choosing the nursing. Anyway, i will leave into Australia. I'm trying to look for easy way. That's why I study English.

Hello there, Thank you for consistently writing your homework. I really appreciate your effort. I'm pretty sure that in no time your English ability will level up. About your major, I think nursing is an interesting job. I know it is hard but i'm sure you can do it. Love, Verna   yesterday is.... >>Yesterday was... yesterday, I went to library to study. >> yesterday, I went to the library to study.As I'm in 3 grade, I have to study to get a job. >> As a junior, I have to study hard to get a job.Many people crowded in libarary including me. >>Many people were crowded in the libarary including me.It was hot day. i walked into there from my home to library. >>It was a hot day. I just walk to go there from my home.my skin was melting. >> Correct (OMG!)they were studying very hard. >>The people there were studying very hard.recently, I feel nusing study is very hard. >>Recently, I felt studying nursing is very hard.It's important to deal with sick people. >> Correctand I think i mistaked choosing the nursing. >> I think I made a mistake for choosing nursing as my major.Anyway, i will leave into Australia. >>Anyway, I will go to AustraliaI'm trying to look for easy way. >>I'm trying to look for easy way to go there.That's why I study English. >> Correct^^