Yesterday's Homework

2014-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hello Debby :) I think I got to be lazy since I went to my home after the vacation. I shouldn't be, but when I'm in my home, I really feel relaxed and comfortable. These makes me lazy and sleep again and again I guess. I should do this after the class immediately. Otherwise I will forget it again! Take care :D <Essay> Comfort food is the same with fast food, right? It is easy for us to prepare and eat and it doesn't take a long time to make them. So I often eat this when I feel lazy or down. However it is verified several times that's not good for our health. We shouldn't eat this frequently.

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Hi there [이름]!^^ Most people would have fast food as their comfort food. How about you? What is your comfort food? I like chocolates a lot. When I feel down I eat sweets. ^^ Enjoy your vacation and do not pressure yourself with homeworks. You deserve to have anough sleep and be lazy.hahahaha. Take care too!^^ ^^T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hello Debby :) >> CORRECT Or> Hi there Debby^^I think I got to be lazy since I went to my home after the vacation.>> I think I got lazy since I came home after the vacation. I shouldn\'t be, but when I\'m in my home, I really feel relaxed and comfortable. >> I shouldn\'t be, but when I\'m home, I really feel relaxed and comfortable. These makes me lazy and sleep again and again I guess.>> CORRECT OR> It makes me feel lazy and I sleep a lot.I should do this after the class immediately. >> CORRECT OR> I must try to get my work done after class. Otherwise I will forget it again!>> CORRECT OR> Or else I would forget about it again.Take care :D>> Take a lot of care.<Essay>Comfort food is the same with fast food, right? >> CORRECT OR> Fast food is considered comfort food right? It is easy for us to prepare and eat and it doesn\'t take a long time to make them. >> CORRECT OR> It\'s convinient and very easy for us to prepare. So I often eat this when I feel lazy or down. >> CORRECT OR> I usually have it when I fell lazy or down. However it is verified several times that\'s not good for our health. >> CORRECT OR> It had been proven that it\'s not always healthy. We shouldn\'t eat this frequently. >> CORRECT Or> We must control our intake.

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