Yesterday's Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Debby :)
I think I got to be lazy since I went to my home after the vacation.
I shouldn't be, but when I'm in my home, I really feel relaxed and comfortable. These makes me lazy and sleep again and again I guess.
I should do this after the class immediately. Otherwise I will forget it again!
Take care :D
<Essay>
Comfort food is the same with fast food, right? It is easy for us to prepare and eat and it doesn't take a long time to make them. So I often eat this when I feel lazy or down. However it is verified several times that's not good for our health. We shouldn't eat this frequently.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^
Most people would have fast food as their comfort food.
How about you?
What is your comfort food? I like chocolates a lot.
When I feel down I eat sweets. ^^
Enjoy your vacation and do not pressure yourself with homeworks.
You deserve to have anough sleep and be lazy.hahahaha.
Take care too!^^
^^T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Hello Debby :)
>> CORRECT
Or> Hi there Debby^^I think I got to be lazy since I went to my home after the vacation.>> I think I got lazy since I came home after the vacation.
I shouldn\'t be, but when I\'m in my home, I really feel relaxed and comfortable.
>> I shouldn\'t be, but when I\'m home, I really feel relaxed and comfortable.
These makes me lazy and sleep again and again I guess.>> CORRECT
OR> It makes me feel lazy and I sleep a lot.I should do this after the class immediately.
>> CORRECT
OR> I must try to get my work done after class.
Otherwise I will forget it again!>> CORRECT
OR> Or else I would forget about it again.Take care :D>> Take a lot of care.<Essay>Comfort food is the same with fast food, right?
>> CORRECT
OR> Fast food is considered comfort food right?
It is easy for us to prepare and eat and it doesn\'t take a long time to make them.
>> CORRECT
OR> It\'s convinient and very easy for us to prepare.
So I often eat this when I feel lazy or down.
>> CORRECT
OR> I usually have it when I fell lazy or down.
However it is verified several times that\'s not good for our health.
>> CORRECT
OR> It had been proven that it\'s not always healthy.
We shouldn\'t eat this frequently.
>> CORRECT
Or> We must control our intake.
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