yesterday was busy.
학생이 쓴 원문
I was very tired after work yesterday and also I am going to be busy
today.
But I am not daunted because I am a hunter. huhuhu I'm just kidding.
I am sipping a cup of coffee and writing for you with listening radio.
I listen the World News which is broadcasting everyday by korean DJ.
It It is helpful to me to approve my listening skills because it runs
english news and its traslation by korean.
There is a Speak Out part which is a program for audience who wanted
to speak their think in english.
I wish I'll paricipate in the part someday.
But I am not ready. ^^ so I want to study hard
and get such a fluent speaking skills.
Anyway it's cold and beautiful morning.
Have a nice day~~~*^^*
강사 첨삭
HI J!!! Wow!! Not only that you are a hunter you are also a multi-tasker. Ha ha you are doing 3 things at once. Wow a super girl. Anyways, just take time to improve your English skills. Be patient okay. Stay happy and beautiful!
Lei J
I was very tired after work yesterday and also I am going to be busy today.
>>correct
But I am not daunted because I am a hunter. huhuhu
>>correct
I'm just kidding.
>>correct
I am sipping a cup of coffee and writing for you with listening radio.
>>I am sipping a cup of coffee and writing to you as I listen to the radio.
I listen the World News which is broadcasting everyday by korean DJ.
>>I listen to the World News which was broadcasted by a Korean DJ everyday.
It It is helpful to me to approve my listening skills because it runs english news and its traslation by korean.
>>It is helpful to improve my listening skills because it runs in English and is translated by the Korean Dj.
There is a Speak Out part which is a program for audience who wanted to speak their think in english.
>>There is a Speak Out part wherein the audience can actually impart their opinions in English.
I wish I'll paricipate in the part someday.
>>I wish I can participate someday.
But I am not ready. ^^
>>correct
>>But I am not ready yet. (better)
so I want to study hard and get such a fluent speaking skills.
>>So I want to study hard and speak fluently in English.
Anyways, it's a cold and beautiful morning.
>>correct
Have a nice day~~~*^^*
>>correct
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.