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학생이 쓴 원문
I\'ll stop for a moment with an angry look on my face at the intruder, then I\'ll continue talking again.
and I will talk to that person after the other people left, and I would make him or her say sorry to me.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sarah!
You are really good at making sentences.
I wish you can continue to practice expressing yourself.
Try to learn more and be more proactive.
You did a great job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I\'ll stop for a moment with an angry look on my face at the intruder, then I\'ll continue talking again.
>> I\'ll stop for a moment with an angry look on my face at the person who interrupted, then I\'ll continue talking again.
and I will talk to that person after the other people left, and I would make him or her say sorry to me.
and I will talk to that person after the other people left, and I would make him or her say sorry to me.
>> I will talk to that person after other people had left, and I would make him or her say sorry to me.
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