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2020-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I like chiristmas cookies and there is a holiday named chosuck and we can eat delicious feast on chosuck. I like all of the Christmas season desserts. So I always wait for Christmas🎄 all day everyday. And I also wait for chosuck too.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sarah!

These are all good examples.

I\'m happy that you are familiar with the common terms in English.

I\'ll see you in class!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I like chiristmas cookies and there is a holiday named chosuck and we can eat delicious feast on chosuck.

>> I like Christmas cookies and there is a holiday called \"Chuseok\" and we can eat a delicious feast on that holiday.
I like all of the Christmas season desserts.

>> Correct
So I always wait for Christmas all day everyday.

>> So, I always wait for Christmas all day and everyday.
And I also wait for chosuck too.

>> I also wait for Chuseok, too.

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