You are going to send email invitations to your business partners about this year\'s conference whic
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
1. To. Melody
>> To: Melody
2. Good evening, this is J from Powerlens company.
>> Good evening! This is J from Powerlens Company.
3. I am sending an email to invite you to our conference which will be held in February.
>> I am inviting you to our conference which will be held in February.
4. P-lens had been loved to elders, and had been our company\'s face for decades.
>> P-lens has been loved by elders, and has been our company\'s face for decades.
5. In this year, we are hoping to refresh our brand image, and are willing to make new lens for younger targets.
>> In this year, we are hoping to refresh our brand image and we are willing to make new lenses for younger targets.
6. This conference will be our start, and we will discuss how to plan a whole year this day.
>> This conference will be the start and we will discuss our this year\'s plan on this day.
7. It will be held in February 7th, 10am.
>> It will be held on the 7th of February at 10AM.
8. 7th floor of pp building, room number 4.
>> It will be on the 7th floor of PP building, Room 4.
9. Can\'t wait to share fantastic ideas for our new project.
>> We can\'t wait to share our fantastic ideas of our new project.
10. Thank you
Best regards,
J
>> Thank you!
Best regards,
J
Very good!
- T. Melody ^^
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.