You don\'t have to be talented to be a great artist, you just have to keep trying. Do you agree? Why
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QUESTION: You don\'t have to be talented to be a great artist, you just have to keep trying. - Unknown. Do you agree? Why? Why not?
Unfortunatly, I don\\\'t agree with the qoute.
>>Unfortunately, I don\'t agree with that quote.
Thomas A. Edison who a great inventor in United States said, \\\"Genius is one percent inspiration, ninety-nine percent perspiration.\\\"
>>The great American inventor Thomas A. Edison. Edison said, \"Genius is one percent inspiration, ninety-nine percent perspiration\"
Many people think that if people try hard to do something, they can get a good result but I think in order to become a great artist, must need to one percent inspiration.
>>Many people think that hard work can produce good results, but I think one percent inspiration is necessary to become a great artist.
It means if artist lack of specail thing such as a talent like genius, the artist never become a great artist.
>>If an artist lacks something special, such as being naturally talented, the artist will never be a great artist.
a artist who keeps trying hard just can be a better artist than other ordinary artists.
>>An artist who just tries hard can be a better artist than any other ordinary artist.
That\\\'s why I disagree with the quote.
>>That is why I disagree with the quote.
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