you had to choose a planet to live in, what planet would you choose and why?

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If I choose a planet to live in, I would choose the Earth.

>> CORRECT!

 First of all, the Earth already has enough resources for people.

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What I mean is that there is air, water, many necessaties for people on the Earth.

>> What I mean is, there is air, water and many other necessities for all the people on Earth.

 When it compares with the Mars, the Mars even doesn\'t have enough air for people to live.

>> When it is compared with Mars, Mars doesn\'t even have enough air for humans to stay alive.

I don\'t think I can live there for long time.

>> CORRECT! 

People said there must be aliens but I am not sure because the Mars looks devastating to live.

>> People say there may be aliens there, but I am not sure because Mars looks like a devastating place to live in.

 Also, I don\'t want to be separated with people that I love.

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If I should move to the other planet, I can\'t see them often anymore.

>> If I could move to another planet, I won\'t be able to see them as often anymore.

It would make me very sad and depressed.

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I want to spend my life with people that I love and whom loved me. 

>> I want spend my life with the people that I love and those who love me.

 Life is short so I want to focus on making happy memories and for these reasons, if I choose a planet to live in, I would choose the Earth.

>> Life is short, so I want to focus on making happy memories. Because of these reasons, If I could choose a planet to live in, I would still choose Earth.