You have enough money to purchase either a house or a busineess. Which would you choose to buy?
학생이 쓴 원문
I will personally purchase a house.
It\'s because I feel burdened by getting a lot of company members and when I think about myself, I don\'t think I have the ability to purchase and operate a business. So, I will purchase a house.
Also, it\'s actually funny story, but my family has been talking to each other for a long time between jokes and truths.
If we move, we would like to move to a comfortable house with two bathrooms because we were feeling uncomfortable using the bathroom.
I think the house should be a space where everyone in the family can be comfortable space.
Therefore, I want to buy a comfortable and good house with enough money and feel satisfied.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!~
I would make the same choice as you do. Acquiring a house is similar to running a business. It is a safe investment because it appreciates over time and can generate passive income through leasing. That is why I am looking forward to purchasing one soon. ^__^
Chammy
I will personally purchase a house.
Or
>> I\'d rather buy a house.
It\'s because I feel burdened by getting a lot of company members and when I think about myself, I don\'t think I have the ability to purchase and operate a business. So, I will purchase a house.
>> It\'s because I feel burdened thinking about hiring several staff and I don\'t think I\'m capable of purchasing and operating a business. So, I would buy a house.
OR
>>I\'m feeling overwhelmed by the number of company members I have to gather, and when I consider my abilities, I don\'t believe I can successfully purchase and run a business.
Also, it\'s actually funny story, but my family has been talking to each other for a long time between jokes and truths.
>> Also, it\'s actually a funny story, but my family has been exchanging jokes and truths for a long time.
If we move, we would like to move to a comfortable house with two bathrooms because we were feeling uncomfortable using the bathroom.
>> If we move out, we would like to move into a comfortable house with two bathrooms because we were uncomfortable using one bathroom.
I think the house should be a space where everyone in the family can be comfortable space.
>> I think the house should be a place where everyone in the family can be comfortable.
Therefore, I want to buy a comfortable and good house with enough money and feel satisfied.
>> Therefore, I want to buy a comfortable and good house when I am satisfied and have enough money.
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