You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy?
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If I have enough money to buy a house or a business, I'd purchase a house.
There are several reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, if buy a business without any preparation, the business could be not safe. The business environment is really sensitive so if I have a plan to run a business, I should consider many things and prepare to go forward to the business.
Secondly, if I have much money, I can choose the location, type of the house, transportation and etcetera. And also buy a house is more stable than buy a business.
For these reasons, I'd rather buy a house than a business.
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Good morning!
Thanks for doing your homework.
You were able to give reasons to support your choice.
I hope you\'ll constantly do your homework to improve your writing skill.
Have a great day!
~T. Jessie~
If I have enough money to buy a house or a business, I\'d purchase a house.
>> Correct!There are several reasons to support my opinion.
>> Correct!First of all, if buy a business without any preparation, the business could be not safe.
>> First of all, if I buy a business without any preparation,it could be not safe.
The business environment is really sensitive so if I have a plan to run a business, I should consider many things and prepare to go forward to the business.
>> The business environment is really sensitive so if I plan to run a business, I should consider many things and prepare to go forward to the business.Secondly, if I have much money, I can choose the location, type of the house, transportation and etcetera.
>> Correct!
And also buy a house is more stable than buy a business.
>> And also buying a house is more stable than buying a business. For these reasons, I\'d rather buy a house than a business.
>> Correct!
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