You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy?

2015-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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If I have enough money to buy a house or a business, I'd purchase a house. There are several reasons to support my opinion. First of all, if buy a business without any preparation, the business could be not safe. The business environment is really sensitive so if I have a plan to run a business, I should consider many things and prepare to go forward to the business. Secondly, if I have much money, I can choose the location, type of the house, transportation and etcetera. And also buy a house is more stable than buy a business. For these reasons, I'd rather buy a house than a business.

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Good morning! Thanks for doing your homework. You were able to give reasons to support your choice. I hope you\'ll constantly do your homework to improve your writing skill. Have a great day! ~T. Jessie~ If I have enough money to buy a house or a business, I\'d purchase a house. >> Correct!There are several reasons to support my opinion. >> Correct!First of all, if buy a business without any preparation, the business could be not safe. >> First of all, if I buy a business without any preparation,it could be not safe. The business environment is really sensitive so if I have a plan to run a business, I should consider many things and prepare to go forward to the business. >> The business environment is really sensitive so if I plan to run a business, I should consider many things and prepare to go forward to the business.Secondly, if I have much money, I can choose the location, type of the house, transportation and etcetera. >> Correct! And also buy a house is more stable than buy a business. >> And also buying a house is more stable than buying a business. For these reasons, I\'d rather buy a house than a business. >> Correct!

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