you haven't filed until you stop trying
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you haven't filed until you stop trying
i almost need story to me.
i wanted give up when i work very hard and to sturdy difficult.
i afraid . i am worrying about filed.
but i will not give up. i have to try.
he tolled "i haven't filed . i have just found 10000 ways that didn't work"
-tomas edison-
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you haven\'t filed until you stop trying
>>Correct!i almost need story to me.
>>I need a story about myself.i wanted give up when i work very hard and to sturdy difficult.
>>I wanted to give up when I work very hard and to study difficult topics.i afraid .
>>I\'m afraid.
i am worrying about filed.
>>I worry about failing.but i will not give up.
>>Correct!
i have to try.
>>Correct!he tolled \"i haven\'t filed . i have just found 10000 ways that didn\'t work\"-tomas edison- >>According to Tomas Edison, I haven\'t failed, I just found 10000 ways that actually didn\'t work.
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