You mentioned in class that you want to go on a trip. Where do you want to go? Why?
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I want to go abroad because abroad are was to eat new foods, was able to go to a new place, have a long time to travel.
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You mentioned in class that you want to go on a trip. Where do you want to go? Why?
I want to go abroad because abroad are was to eat new foods, was able to go to a new place, have a long time to travel. >> I want to go abroad because I can taste and eat new food, go to new places, and travel around for a long time.
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