you should visit
학생이 쓴 원문
I hope you visit Daejeon city where I live. Why? Because... Daejeon is the city near Seoul after you arrive to South Korea.
It\'s not fancy, but there are many sightsees. Besides, I am here
I can be a good guide for yo.u
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]. Thank you for doing your homework. You did great and I hope you keep on doing that. - T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
I hope you visit Daejeon city where I live.
>> I hope you Daejeon city. This is where I live.
Why? Because... Daejeon is the city near Seoul after you arrive to South Korea.
>> Daejeon is a city near Seoul.
>> It\'s not fancy but, there are many places you can sightsee. I am also here.
>> I can guide you around the city.
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