You've just come home from a terrible day at work. How will you relax?
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For women motherhood changes their lives, but for men parenting does exact the same thing. I feel you Sir [이름], but don\'t lose hope. Kids will grow in a blink of an eye, so enjoy their childhood days!
~Teacher Eunice
Living as a father, I can\'t relieve my stress once I come home, because my children would like to play with me until they go to the bed.
>>> Living as a father, I can\'t relieve my stress once I come home, because my children would like to play with me until they go to bed.
The only thing I can do is to grab a drink after my babies sleep.
>>> The only thing I can do is to grab a drink when my babies fall asleep.
My wife and me are eager to do the exercise or do having fun, however it is not easy to have a time out of home.
>>> My wife and I are eager to do exercises or have fun, however; it is not easy to have time out of home.
If we went out every the other day, my children would be sad and depressed because they would like to have time with us.
>>> If we will go out every other day, my children would be sad and depressed because they would like to have time with us.
I get stressed when I feel that somebody ignore me or scold me.
>>> I get stressed when I feel that somebody ignores me or scolds me.
The easy way to relieve my stress is just sighing deeply or going out for smoking.
>>> The easiest way to relieve my stress is just sighing deeply or going out for smoking.
I know that there are many ways to make people relax.
>>> correct!
It can be drinking alcohol, smoking, doing exercise, meeting friends to tell somebody\'s worries and sleeping.
>>> It can be drinking alcohol, smoking, doing exercise, sleeping, and meeting friends to vent out about my worries.
But for me, I have been doing only bad things.
>>> correct!
>>> For me, I\'ve been doing a bad habit as a routine.
I should find another things to be relaxed.
>>> correct!
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