Young adult\'s most hardest thing
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I think this topic for me, because I am a young adult.
Young adults, We are very ambiguous of almost part.
Old adults tell us, we don\'t have so much passion and patience.
And young student tell us you look so already grow up cool.
But the present, we got confused, change many thing everyday and we don\'t have any fix thing.
Most hardest point is find my self.
When I loose my ego, I am not existence in the world anymore.
Just my opinion.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Being a young adult is probably some of the best years of your life, but equally the most stressful, right? Young adults experience different kinds of stress. It\'s just a matter of how you are going to manage it.
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I think this topic for me, because I am a young adult.
>> I think this topic is for me because I am a young adult.
Young adults, We are very ambiguous of almost part.
>> Young adults are very ambiguous to almost anything.
Old adults tell us, we don\'t have so much passion and patience.
>> Adults usually tell us that we don\'t have the passion and patience.
And young student tell us you look so already grow up cool.
>> And children look at us like we are very cool.
But the present, we got confused, change many thing everyday and we don\'t have any fix thing.
>> In reality, we are often confused. We make changes constantly and don\'t fix things right away.
Most hardest point is find my self.
>> The hardest part is finding one\'s self.
When I loose my ego, I am not existence in the world anymore.
>> When I loose my ego, it\'s like I am not existing in the world anymore.
Just my opinion.
>> This is just my opinion.
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