Young Ann, and old Ann
학생이 쓴 원문
I am judging to myself so many thing change inside my mind.
Long time ago when I was student, I was very young and just weak.
When I heard a little bit of sensitivity sentences, it was very hurts and I cried right away.
But now I don\'t know it is good or bad.
When I heard some that bother me I can\'t hold in it. Just fight right away.
Not cry only angry and I try to refute it with logic.
I think.....that is most different thing young Ann, and now Ann.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
You can notice that you have matured in those changes. Good job!
Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.
-Teacher EliseI am judging to myself so many thing change inside my mind.
>> I judge myself a lot about so many things.
Long time ago when I was student, I was very young and just weak.
>> Long time ago, when I was student, I was very weak.
When I heard a little bit of sensitivity sentences, it was very hurts and I cried right away.
>> When someone say sensitive things to me, I get hurt and cry easily.
But now I don\'t know it is good or bad.
>> But I don\'t know whether it\'s good or bad.
When I heard some that bother me I can\'t hold in it. Just fight right away.
>> When I hear that someone is saying bad things to me, I just fight them right away.
Not cry only angry and I try to refute it with logic.
>> I don\'t cry or get angry anymore and I try to refute it with logic.
I think.....that is most different thing young Ann, and now Ann.
>> I think those are the difference between the old Ann and the Ann now.
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