Young people
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I agree that young people can be a leader.
I think that people who have the knowledge and experience of the organization and work area can be a leader regardless of age.
However, the older the organization, the older the person may be in it, so young leaders should make a lot of effort to improve their teamwork.
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I agree that young people can be a leader.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
I think that people who have the knowledge and experience of the organization and work area can be a leader regardless of age.
I think that people who have the knowledge and experience of the organization and work area can be a leader regardless of age.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
However, the older the organization, the older the person may be in it, so young leaders should make a lot of effort to improve their teamwork.
However, the older the organization, the older the person may be in it, so young leaders should make a lot of effort to improve their teamwork.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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